She's The Badass

It is a really nice story with good pacing. I like that the regular civilian life interaction, something which most world war stories do not show. It adds a lot of value to the story. As for the main character himself, he is well thought out, smart and confident but not so confident that he comes across as cocky to the reader. I hope he himself is being set up for some character development later in the story. As for right now, I home that we can get a more detailed scene setting, they are good but I think it can be more detailed.

A different and cool story, there have been hints of him only like ancient language, I suppose that will be his main power…Just upload faster!!!!

Really great start. Has Potential 😁.         

Im really proud of you my fellow filipino. seeing you here is just amazing!Even though your work somewhat resembled shadow hack, you gave it a good twist and make this story a sci-fi like.keep up the good work brother!

"Oh but wait, before we start the missions, I need to first see if my katana can absorb the Kueng."

Affinity: Fire, Earth

+15% Critical Rate

So, the story Love and betrayal will cover love story between Xiaomi and Feng'er ( who is three years older and grew together as neighbors with Xiaomi) Until they were separated, when Xiao'er moved to Italy with her family when she was twelve years of age. They swore to forever be together and love each other as long as they live and breath by the oath of blood. ( That why Xiaomi was super exited hehe)